nice topic, i haven't seen anyone post anything about magic before.. creative
i was feeling these lines most:
magic is a idea, it cant b sensed, dnt try n listen 2 it with you ears
see it with ur eys, touch it, or smell it wit your nose
its a transient entity of force which nobody knows
^the only thing i would leave as advice is to refrain from using too many "big" words, cuz you wouldn't want people to have to run to their dictionary and look up half the words, plus it can mess with your flow at times.. but besides that, this piece was pretty nice..
Lady Fiya

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