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~Break Bred or Play Dead~
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IP:
Voted For: Phantom
Its stunning, I come back, kids'r ready for owning
Talk bout PBA??? Son just practice some bowling
4/10
Cause I whore kids, constantly, so why the hate?
I get buzz for holding mics, you do the same...
...from holding mikes hard lemonade
3/10
Shit... a battle here? Its bound to be amusin'
When Phan is only the best... in a midst of confusion
6/10
Ya losin... I mean it, and its all in poor taste
When I say aliases only work...
...IF YOU WERE GOOD IN THE FIRST PLACE
3/10
Which ya werent, so I'll chin check ya and begin
And I want to here none'ya lip...
...flapping swollen in the wind
3/10
But I cant argue... Ya skill phantom... I mean shit...
Phantom literally means that shit aint been there to begin wit
2/10
Punches were weak
wordplay was non existent
ya structure was aight
similies werent there
metas were ok
You pressured Chrit, but i'm happy not to see you duck
Now i'll deliver slices quicker than kids working at Pizza Hut
6/10
Chrit thinks he's a God now, thinkin we all remember him
When he's just been merked so bad..
................................he registered in a new name again!
7/10
Chrits barely even a dope text head anymore, fact is hes done
But least afterwards hes comin out with a record.......of 0-1!
6/10
Chrit aint even trying, but neither am I, and he gets played
So he now hes off the hook and straight onto the switchblade
4/10
Plus I wont even use reclycled lines, its easy to get by him
Cuz his whole state of mind is less significant than Rhode Island
And almost ran out of punches to truly smash this fool with
5/10
So I decided to take the loss, be a man, and hand it to him!
u lost it a lil bit..I suggest u put forth effort next time
5/10
Punches were ok
wordplay was aight
structure was good
metas were good
similies were good
the last 4 bars were Garbage but u started off nice
I dont kno where doin Chrit but u lost this one hands down
came down 2 harder punches.wordplay and meta's
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