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Old 12-09-04, 07:43 PM   #13
Pop Lotty
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From: Jerz.....
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Stop tryna make ya verses look good, like its going on date nigga.

Realize...the font doesnt make your punches better.
And
Replace some of that vocab, and them comparisons with a some wit. Nobody wants to read a boring verse.

All I got to say for now.
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