very emotional piece of poetry.. nice..
i need you in my arms so i can feel your wartm and beauty
im gunna do anything and everything i can to get u back, its my duty
you always be in my heart and in yours baby i hope i exsist
but baby please fall back into my arms .. you cant leave me like this
^ending was nice..
seems like u poured sum feelings into this poem fa real.. and this what made me want to continue reading.. u stuck to the topic throughout the whole thing, structure good too.. no flaws that stood out in my opinion. good luck,
pz...

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