aight look troop, I aint the best, but I know my shit, first off, don't do anything about the vocab, it's fine, just try not to focus on it as much, I like the meta's, you great at that shit, but you wanna add a lil more wordplay in there, mix it a bit nah mean? also you gotta throw the met's in with a punch or personel, ya can't just say "This encounter is disastorous like tight rope walkers in casts" ya know, look up some personels on the guy, on his name, and switch up lines so it's like so

Bar 1. Use meta's and throw in a punch
Bar 2. Use wordplay throw in a presonel
Bar 3. Use meta's throw in a personel
Bar 4. Use wordplay throw in a punch

Or you can just be like fuck wordplay, stick wit the meta's only, as long as you mix in harder punches and personels.