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Old 12-09-04, 10:18 PM   #2
Scareface
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I Like the way yOu Use your Lines very Precise But I still See A Few mistakes that you make its like u lack the POWER of punchez you gotta sit bac one day and jus think of punch bars mayne that'll really help u out and they cant be played out .As far as your vocab its decent its the average. you definelty need to work on your multi's that'll help you out like........................................<that much LOL.
But i liked your verse you did good mayne keep up the good work

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Mayne you need alot of elevation mayne and stop actin stupid and get that stuff out ya sig mayne i think thats the dumbest thing someone can do mayne ....,.,...Never put yaself down mayne i dont care how wack you are ...far as your verse you need someone to tutor you on how to put toogether a average/basic verse mayne i cant do it bcuz i dont know how to teach very well so......I hope you take the thing out ya sig and you elevate in the future mayne feel me?
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