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Old 12-09-04, 10:39 PM   #14
Spite
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Voted For: OptiKaL

man this battle straight sucked. Flow was ebonics was off a little bit because of the 1 syllable rhymes you should mix it up with multis ya need to elevate. Optikal you were alrite nothing hard hitting but kept it decent.

ur ryhme gonna be played out if u diddnt try n bite it first
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