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Old 12-09-04, 11:09 PM   #16
Parallel
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Voted For: King~~Dipset

Young deedz:
ok well you had way to much lines there...way to much...plus your stucture was way off but hell you did flow but i still dont feel that you had punchlines or wordplay or any kind of complexity in your verse...elevate...than we'll see what you could do...also yuo had some weak vocab all around you were weak in this battle.....................................2/10

King Dipset:
ok not bad...hmm stucture was pretty good and the vocabulary coulda been better but hell your punchlines were pretty good coulda used a little bit of wordplay cuz you still need elevation but not bad from you...overall you take this one so easy...6/10
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