Voted For: Elemental Soul

coopa bang

Ima go ahead and snatch ya sould from ya bodie,
Seeing hoe you suck at rappin ill consider it as Me vs nobody,
(WEAK OPENING LINE, IT NEEDS TO BE MORE CREATIVE...NO DISS OR PUNCHES, JUST CHATTER...4/10)

So get prepared to have another loss to ya collection,
And if i screwed over on this voting
.....it'll look like another G.Bush election,
(PLAYED OUT...A WEAK DISS...COULDA BEEN MORE CREATIVE WITH THAT...4/10)

You being better than me is like KOBE gettin traded to da Heat....it aint gonna happen,
Since ya whole flow is writtin but aint "Comin out Hard" like ya pussie stabbin...
(WEAK CLOSER...YOUR BEST BAR, AND ITS NOT THAT GOOD...5/10)

AIGHT...NO HATE FAM...BUT YOU NEED TO ELEVATE ALOT...YOU SEEM TO KNO HOW TO RHYME, NOW YOU NEED TO DIG DEEPER AND FIND SOME RAW AND UNCUT SHIT...LOL...GET CREATIVE...USE WORDS IN YOUR RHYMES THAT NO ONE ELSE DOES...GET A DICTIONARY OUT OR SUMTHIN...BUT YOUR VERSE WAS VERY WEAK FAM...IT HAD NO GOOD PUNCHES, DISSES, METAS...NOTHING...WORK ON THAT...~1~




ELEMENTAL SOUL

Your like Coopa from super mario,cept you can't spit flames,
You don't belong in this site's skin,like a leech who can't drain,
(DECENT OPENER...OKAY FLOW...DECENT PUNCHES...5/10)

Your a damn hoe,just another stupid ass to strangle,
bANG'LE neva be 'sharp' even if i crushed his head to a 'triangle',
(LOL...NOT 2 BAD...PUNCH AND MULTIE OKAY...CREATIVE...6/10)

Ya rhymes are 'week'er than seven days,fake like plastic fruits,
This kid coop can't even rhyme better than doctor zoose
(DECENT CLOSER...CREATIVITY OK...FLOW OK...6/10)

OK...YOUR VERSE WAS AIGHT...WASNT ANYTHING 2 SPECIAL, BUT YOU CAME DECENT HERE...YOUR FLOW WAS GOOD, A LIL BIT CHOPPY...TOPICS GOOD...DECENT PUNCHES AND DISSES...A FEW MULTIES IN THERE...STRUCTURE GOOD...OVERALL IT WAS OKAY...LOL...ONLY THING I SUGGEST...JUST WRITE YOUR SHIT NORMAL...NONE OF THAT>>>>> bANG'LE AND 'triangle'....

VOTE ELEMENTAL SOUL

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