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Old 12-10-04, 12:08 AM   #10
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Voted For: WICKEDCLOWN

iight here go my explanation

Wicked - NICE multiz decent vocab really long but itz kool sum shit iz basic but itz over shadowed by tha punchez nice structure sum linez r forced an stretched but i still felt this shit more then intellegent but hez nice 2 barely had any forced linez but ur elevatin again work on tha forced linez unless u start bein audio but yeah overall niceness couple linez i wuzn't feelin but most of 'em were pretty good so u got it at least in my eyes a couple linez i thought were dope where "Fuck your inteligent flowz imma rip ya a new ass hole
since ya daddy sodomized the first one and stole ya innocent soul" that had me crackin up but u went a little whack wen u said "out on the rap game, it passed you right the fuck by
now all you got is the net and thats why you cry" come on man u done WAAAAY better then that step that up homie i kno u can do better


Flow - shitz pretty nice 2 okay punchez personalz were mediocre...very blah structure needz work a couple linez were stretched an a lotta forced linez work on that but if u look past that itz pretty nice overall u had an okay vocab but wuz feelin wickedz verse more but better luck next time cuz i seen better from u an wicked but this wuz an overall even battle u only lost cuz tha forced linez an structure work on that an u'll be sum mad dopeness homie u didn't have any linez i felt were fantastically dope so i can't give an xample but herez were u went whack "I bless goons... You spit cuz its too hard to swallow this
When i get you confused & nauseated like RuPaul's Gynecologist" come on i seen better from u as it iz...i thought u would had this cuz i seen sum hott shit from u b4 but this battle jus wuzn't good 4 u

big upz ta both flow did nice but i think wicked came better so my vote = Wicked Clown
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