Voted For: WICKEDCLOWN


nice battle propz to both

personals-iight it was hard hittin on both....flow intellegent you had some crazy personals....talkin bout him d/r and shit...and WIcked you had some nice ones too....kept it close it was nice...but overall Wicked's fit a lil bit more better into his dropp.....kept it on topic....

Structure-Ok......Flow had this one by a long shot.....i wasn't really feelin the way you had ya stuff typed out WICKED..i mean it made it harder to read ya dropp......soooo Flow you get structure...

Punches-Ok....Flow ya punches were pretty much played....they was "AIGHT" and Wicked you had some nice punches...they hit harder....you didn't reallly have multies to get ya back on it...so the punches weren't all the way there.....flow you had decent ones....but they a lil bit too much played ya feel me.....

Vocab-vocab....was ok in this battle with both ya'll you all be sayin stuff i'd be hearing Really Good Freestylers using....so they were a lil bit played.......i did enjoy readin it but if the Vocab was better this would be a real nice battle.....but yea ya both need to use more complex VOCAB...i mean Love and Shove(WICKED) are basic vocab.....so up there....

Multis-Neither of you really had these so neither of you guys get this one...you guys know ya'll coulda dun betta here....i mean...i've seen ya'll battle before and i just wasn't feelin the fact you aint using too many multies..i mean thats what makes it tighter too read....ya get me...

Enjoyment-Overall i enjoyed Wickeds drop more.it was more hard hittin and it attracted my attention more..it was on point....it kept me coming back for more.......

Overall-Overalll i'd have to Say Wicked gets this one.....he came harder which is what you need to do...and thats what he did...so he gets the vote......so keep it up..and keep droppin.....

Notes-both of ya'll need to add some more multies and some more vocab...but otha than that this was nice....positve dropss.....keep thesse coming...and i'm expecting to come back for more...pzz ~1~

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