i was pretty impressed by this, sounded good...you need to be more confident with your skills, i liked your style though, very meaningful...keep spittin emotion...good shit

just keep flowing, get it down a little bit more, delivery was decent, you are quickly improving...good shit man...

vocab was a little lacking, but thats alright on emotional tracks...

anyways the only thing you need to sorta change is how you pronounce words...
really pay attention to it, over pronounce things...it just makes it easier for the listeners...

quality was good though

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