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Old 12-10-04, 07:15 AM   #13
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Voted For: MC Firetruck

this bitch is wishing to shooting stars so i grabbed a uzi
now wat bitch i told u dont push me
cuz mc firetruck is a ho straight pussy
my lines are so hot u need a firetruck
you practically copied his punch. The first 3 lines don't even flow right.. and don't rhyme 3 lines in a battle

Keep callin' the Firetruck 'cuz ya hot breath is outta control
An OK punchline

Hopped Empire's nuts, yeah I know you hate, tryin' to elevate?
Shit, the only thing you're ever over...is weight
Another good punch

Go compensate for not eatin' MC's, get a snack, munch
Fightin's the closest you'll ever get to droppin' a fat punch
good internal rhyme

Overall:
flow truck
personals lil, but didn't hit hard
internals/multis truck
punches truck
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