Voted For: anxiety

vote/anxiety..

pros/cons of anxiety

Ok...I liked the whole..'job' heist thing...
the srtucture was aight..but the multis were great
and so was flow..but I was lookin for emotion
and relation to the topic and being..and you had it..
very enjoying to read..and no tactics for advangtage..

Nostradamous

okay,you had good vocab and structure..but
your emotion..and your commitment to stick to the topic
wasn't there..it actually was all over the place..
but the oen thing I did like..is how you seperated the
two chapters..with great titles..but it didn't win this battle

vote/anxiety..

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