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Voted For: streetryda
oh goddamn man...an realest claimin he tha shit an he wunna battle me...bitch please anyway
Streetryda - nice punchez incredible vocab massive multiz feelin this shit fa real didn't really have any forced barz...but u did have a couple stretched onez utha then that pretty nice structure nice flow kept it goin i wuz really feelin that "envison me inscision thee with percision and fission causin ya to have lesions...
treason me? believin ya gona need corasedin when i attack in masses with vast legions" line it wuz dope as fuck haha but ur 1st line wuz whack "you couldnt be the Realest if you was peelin off tags of authenticity...
missin~me cuz ya punches have no Rythem see they stay distantly...
" wuzn't feelin that but u overshadowed it wit tha utha line
Realest - Whack....so basic u had an okay vocab but u come on here like ur tha shit street murked tha shit out u an this ain't no d/r or hate i actually took tha time 2 read both u had forced linez no multiz like 1 personal an it wuz corny shit "I'll serve you rhymes like a full course meal-let me seal this deal//
I'm on an insane campaign to attain gain and obtain fame//
" that wuz tha only OKAY line an ur still a newb usin tha slashez stop that basically wut u wrote 4 this battle wuz jus an open mic u gotta stay focused i'm not givin u any tipz cuz then every1 will be able 2 see it once this battle closez but i wouldn't help u anyway...but ur overall verse wuz corny elevate an stay focused an u'll get better
therez my explanation no hate 2 either but my vote = streetryda
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Originally Posted by Paranoid
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