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Old 12-10-04, 04:44 PM   #11
Parallel
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Voted For: Psyco

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ok first of all im not gonna vote the way i usually do but damn thats because of your stucture...its so fucked up...work on that...your punches are hella weak it sounds like your greeting them for christmas thats how there not punches...wordplay as i said work on punchlines....3/10 No Hate..

Psyco:
hmmm your stucture was also so fucked up....but you had some hot punches in there and a lil twist almost wordplay good attemts....vocab was on the weake end for both of you guys.....hmm...what else is there...hmm.....o ya metaphores hmm they were used well in the punches for you...nice...6/10...No Hate
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