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Old 12-10-04, 10:25 PM   #13
Ancel
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Indeph... your vreese was solid.... nice flow nice punches and your personals was good.... your streucture was okay but i dont understand why you center your verses like that only time i have seen someone do that is in topical and poetry but that your thing...

your two best bars was

Ambient.... friend.. pal..please die a slow death..
how could u swallow a win..rockin a girl with no neck?
everyone will agree...how many people thought he was female
but I think he failed..tryin to get votes the same way as DML..

Only adivice i could give to you is to keep your shit simple but complex and make your shit rhyme more... throw some multis and more metas in there

Ambient... your verse was good aswell but i really just wasnt feeling your personal... that link was pretty lame and your opener was gay as fuck and played... sex punches went out a long time ago.... your closer was okay but not really that good and to me your opener and closer combined its 45% of my shit

v/indeph