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Old 12-10-04, 11:57 PM   #28
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Plutoniums straight from da lab but only cuz he was born in a test tube
I'll use acid to make your flesh move.. you know im the best dude
flow was good but it was pretty basic-
A battle or a car accident its still nothing for me to break ya grill in
I would say you gonna make it but no rapper ever came from new zealand
solid- no filler at all, effective bar, good personal as well
You just lost, but you dont have a choice, or a say in the matter
It's kinda like you don't have a voice, but still try to chit chatter
I personally hate the rhyme itself, aside from that its o.k but not ur best again
Point blank you should fold i'll win... make you fall like bowling pins
Plus youre around enygma so much i thought yall was the olsen twins
lol If its true its funny, since I dont know I take ur word for it, decent bar here
This battle's over, im not spare-ing him, im preparing my paring knife
Because if Plutonium got in the Source, you'd owe them a pair of mics
decent closer, i felt the punch, setup was nice- a couple weak spots but all in all good verse, 1

giving me food for thought...how can flow be ill a writer
U like jumbled "A Hitler", cause U both wind up "The Liar"*
Nice wordplay here, but why you say U both? it just made the line seem recycled to me, but good wordplay definately
your verse backfired...& like always he's in bad condition
even let you feed...but he keeps forgetting new system
kind of a weak punch, i expected some sick shit after that opener
think he could flow intelligent...G, not with his additude
ghostwriters flows for him...a hr. Must been a prostitute
^^that's how he flowed & he's still wack...mention rest?
his biggest success was to conquest...no-show rematch
both these bars flow badly, and writing a wack line and saying thats how ur opponent writes is not an effective attack, or at least not here
see that? and da kid didn't even make a name for himself
cause he once shared his name with mag...,virtue as well!
If its true its funny and again since I dont know then props to u, good closer

after re-reading both verses I felt that Plutonium had the nicest wordplay in the battle, but consistency and punches go to flow, I just couldn't get over those two bars in the center of plutoniums verse...1
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