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Old 12-11-04, 11:21 AM   #11
The Eruption
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From: DC (murder capitol of da world)
This was feedback posted for TRUTH

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This was an overall good batle but im goin to have to give this one to ..........
I really like the flow to both verses
there was a nice touch to LYRICAL flow but it still could have been a little better with the wordplay, Nice sructure to both verses, TRUTH had some GREAT line too
i really liked his flow but ur metas werent visible but punchlines were sick
nice battle


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I know its a lil weak but its ok
Please return the favor
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