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Old 12-11-04, 01:14 PM   #24
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This is not hate feedback just truth...

Titobronsky--- ur lyrics were ok, but it seemed like u were talkin', not rapping at all... the beat was nice, but it's like u avoided it completely.. it was off, but u can alwayz work on that.. just sounded like u were speakin to four clipz not dissin, then ur too close to the mic..

Empire--------this time u were kinda far from the mic or your vocals weren't eq-ed, ur lyrics weren't bad either, u fell off in a couple of places.. i seen sum emotion in this but u weren't as hype as i thought u were gonna be, cuz we know u already confident-u just need to express that on the mic..
No hate, just work on them things and y'all str8....

I didn't read the other feedback, i just listened to the track and that's my input.. hopefully y'all can look at it in a positive way to help elevate for future drops..
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