lmao this was kinda funny dont get me wrong it was good but the nipple twister line just killed it lmao fuuny shit.... the wordplay and flow was pretty damn sick man keep dropping Open mics like this and i will critique them just work on your strcutre try to make the lines around the same length

overall : 8.5/10

can you drop some feedback in my open mic in my sig thanks man

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