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Voted For: .Aeral.
damn.....Aeral you killed him.....
Punches-LOL Aeral got this one i liked this line righht here its what killed um..."leave ya insides like accappella when I take out your (heart) beat" that was tight right there....lol damn....lil cali you needta learn how ta diss like that right there......
Personals-overall i'd say this one goes to Aeral he dissed ya record Lil cali you just talked shit....lol man Aeral i can tell you aint no rookie bringin shit like that...i liked this line for a personal-"You're invisible in R.v. , sorry but I'm just sayin the truth..
..Cos Ae's got around 20 post... & still more respected than you" that was nice.....lil cali again just shit talkin ....
Vocab-Overall they wasn't really no hard vocab going on...but the basic vocab Aeral was bringin lol...damn it made it work.....ya feel me on this one??????
Enjoyment-Overall i enjoyed reading Aeral's drop 100% more..it was nice...i mean it wasn't as weak and basic as Lil Cali's....man cali your teaching's aint really help huh??
Notes: ok Lil cali you need to up on ya punches,personals,and multies,and vocab.....Aeral you have nice punches and nice personals you just need to up on ya Multies and Vocab.....
nice battle return favor...any battle in my sig
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