Voted For: MetaSkriptz
arright, I wouldn't call this one sided cuz xceed didn't suck, I just really wasn't feelin it, It was kinda a tough read the way your lines kept switchin length, I see how you switched up the topic a little bit to try and make it interesting but you kinda went back and forth on it... meta I liked ur twist more- the verse in itself seemed to be more in a christmas spirit- easier read for me all in all, so im votin you.... please return the fav if u get a chance....
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...d=1#post1807015