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Old 12-11-04, 09:53 PM   #13
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this was a pretty close battle :

9th degree : to be honest i wasnt feelin ya verse that much you had some dope lines but the 3rd bar about the suicide thing was wack and the closer was wack so basically all i had to go on were your other 3 bars and they were just decent you had good wordplay in most of them but your punches didnt hit too hard... your best bar was the 4th one about beating me to being basic that was pretty dope and probably the best bar in this battle but it was a little stretched

overall : 7.2/10

LE: your opener was decent but u could have worded it better to make it a better punch but it was aiight... good strcture flow and wordplay were all good maybe a lil bit better than 9th's and your last bar was pretty dope also your best bar

overall : 7.5/10
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