Voted For: MetaSkriptz
Whoa...both came good in this one.
CeEd...I liked the point of view that you wrote your topical. It was unique...your flow was good, structure needs work. Vocab was decent...imagery I wasn't feelin'. Overall, nice but work on your imagery.
Meta...the kind of shit I expected from you. Very good flow and vocab...imagery was there...the perspective you wrote it in was completely believable. You get this one for an overall stronger verse.
Return the favor please...
Topical: hipnoticz
Battle: 9th Degree
Topical: Metaskriptz