Voted For: TheWackestMC

MaStErMind

*TheWackestMC* cant *Master* this *Mind*/
im bout to beat you like a slave and this master dont lie//
you brought a knife to a gun fight-its gonna be a catastrophe/
punchure ya skin with my lyrical daggers-you cant make a pass at me//
assault you like my name was stephen jackson/
this cat was desperate to battle-still want some action?//
while you at home watchin 8 mile on tv/
ill be on 106 and park kickin it wit AJ and free//
thinkim gonna pass up a battle wi you?-bitch please/
how easy was it to *Bitch-Slap* this MC//
yo you got almost 3 days to post ya verse/
but he probably wont-too busy trin to get his nut to burst//...............your verse was played man...you had decent flow, and the punches were decent...but that kickin it with aj and free line...someone has used that before...i am from MICHIGAN 2 man...so i know it aint your line...but other than that, you just need to be a little bit more creative and more raw...your verse...>>>>>7/10<<<<<<


TheWackestMC

yall dont me to b sparkin the metal, u play ya part in stillettos
i'll lay-up wit ya bitch with the art of Carmello
u say u a mastermind?....i got a faster rhyme
that'll smash ya mind... and leave u last in line
them punches pluck this nigga right back in time
they way u wear ya Mic , that shit is fashion crime
boy i aint playin, im as wack as they come
only time u POP-POP is when u crakin ya thumbs
u aint hot those lines is too cold to bake
n ya bars aint heavy, they fools gold in weight
this bitch prolly stop n cry, when i drop his size
n reveal the fact that he likes dudes wit cock inside
stop ya lies, thats why u get ostricized
and them rhymes u use is so old that they fossilized>>>>>CHO MAN...YOUR VERSE...WAS...UMM...GOOD...LOL...YOU HAD GOOD FLOW...IT WAS IN A WAY FUNNY, AND THE USE OF METAS, VOCAB AND MULTIES WAS GOOD...THAT IS WHAT EDGED YOU, WAS THE VOCAB AND MULTIE HITS...THE ONLY THING YOU NEED TO WORK ON IS ELEVATING TO A NEW LEVEL...IN THIS BATTLE YOU WERE 5 LEVELS UP...GET TO TEN, AND YOU WILL B SET...>>>>>>9/10<<<<<<<<

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