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Old 12-12-04, 11:12 PM   #9
....Gone....
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fuckin bitch sayin that i suck last time i called u out u duck
u need to shut your mouth when i tell u to fuckin cluck
im gonna merk you fo free fuck u over like john ghotti
lines are packin so much heat im gonna 'set it off'
u dick ridin so much u know every time I sneeze or cough
actin tough with just 1 win cuz ill rip u to pieces like da berlin
quit being such a herb for i beat u to the curb causin a damestik disturb
sayin u ill my punches leavin holes in your grill cauzin blood to spill
cuz i was born to merk and born to kill
introduced to the game taken ppls records down to fufill
^^^^^^^^^^^^ IT WAS AN OK VERSE SOME PLAYED OUT PUNCHES SOME WERE GOOD U HAD MULTI'Z







Mastermind, delivering A devastating description,
Of how I'm killin this cat and proving my prediction
My techniques are Tighter than a DareDevils butt-cheeks
Replying to this will take Ya longer than a hibernating mammal sleeps
Get out ya dictionary, cuz some words may be hard to understand;
U'll soon find out that I get more W's than the Wu-Tang clan
So "Protect Ya Neck" and I'm accepting your Apologies
I spit COLDER shit than a toilet in the Rockies
No Doubt, this dude's rhyme skillz are straight up pathetic
From me, U'll be catchin more shotz than a fuckin Diabetic
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ O AIGHT NICE FLOW GOOD PUNCHES, NICE WORDPLAY (WU-TANG CLAN LINE)


OVERALL= THIS IS AN BALANCE BATTLE BOTH OF YOU NEED TO ELEVATE ON PUNCES.... FLOW WAS GOOD, ILL ITERIT U HAD GOOD PUNCHEDS NICE WORDPLAYS , LIL CALI U HAD SOME PLAYED OUT PUNCHES SOME WERE GOOD, MULTI'Z AT THE END WERE GOOD. BUT I GOTS TO GO WITH THE PERSON THAT HAD LESS=PLAYED OUT PUNCHES AND THATS ILL ITERIT, LIL CALI USE CREATIVE PUNCES SOME WERE PLAYED OUT, SOME WERE GOOD BUT IT DIDNT HIT MUCH HARDER

PEACE
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