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Old 12-13-04, 03:41 PM   #10
fluidmoon
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Hey, good track fellas,
jpoll~you started off good, your flow was on point, but i heard where you stop and start again, try to mix it better, but nice job,lyrics were great..havent heard you in awhile
Deadly~nice emotion man, always, good lyrics as well, still heard some pops but it got better
Triple~nice jumpoff into your verse...very hard sounding, and emotional...damn, some peeps are telling you to tone it down,but i think the power in your voice sounds great...
oh and i love the hook..gotta learn how to do that shit with vocals...anyways, dope track, i enjoyed it..1
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