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Old 12-13-04, 05:36 PM   #9
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Voted For: Lawless (Hs)

LAW
Wordplay:
1this cat couldn't get 'signed' if he was a fan's paper/
2but I rather see this bitch freeze up like a scratched PS2 game/
3he couldn't spit fresh if he gargled listerene/
4G cat couldn't drop hot bars if he was a welder/
5the bullets will have him makin' moves similar to Honey Daniels/
6i'll fucc around and ground ya like a dissapointed parent/
7can't talk hard cause the only grill he stepped to was to recieve a plate a chicken/
8I'll have this BITCH on his knees like he was bein knighted by the queen of britian/

^ Lawless easily had the best wordplay and punches. Look at how many punchlines he used there.

multis, internals, rhymes: lawless easily. he had internals on nearly every line, whereas a few of goldencats line didn't even rhyme, they just repeated the last two or three words at the end of the line, which would sound horrible

lawless takes this on the superior rhymes and wordplay
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