Voted For: JaeBurnz354

Man this is stupidity. he wants to win?? He-just-can't.
There's more shit in his verse than sewage treatment-plant
I'll beat the man, he's in Dan-ger, I make this gay-hurt
only by spittin pure fire and watching as 'jae-burns'
and You'll never-Win-this, you're dead-and-finished
I'm gonna wreck-this-bitch as he gets-diminished
Judging by his text alone, I can tell he's not-clever...

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Originally Posted by JaeBurn354
i replied to your open 5 w/e call out and or w/e
^^^^^^^^^ YOUR PUNCHES WAS KINDA PLAYED OUT FAM....NO HARD DECENT PUNCHES CAME FROM THIS VERSE EXCEPT THAT LAST BAR WITH THE PM QUOTE OTHER THAN THAT THIS WAS AN WEAK VERSE



Why in the hell did i think of battling this new be...
You not talented, i can see right thorugh you like rubies/
Spit to complicate what you anticipate to be wack...
But wait in suspense if truthfully think or feel like that/
Nobody is layed back, I'm especially fierce here...
Ya style has lyrica gaping hole like pierced ears/
You's a nobody why even step up to the plate...
Please call barry bonds for some steroids to take/
There that should give you more of a punchline...
I'ma leave u liek six packs, when it's crunchtime/(Hurting)
^^^^^^^^^^^ O OK PUNCHES WERE OK NOT GOOD THOUGH ELEVATE ON THAT FAM...FLOW WAS GOOD...HAD AN LIL WORDPLAY THERE.......REMEMBER TO USE PERSONALS OFTEN IN YOUR BATTLES AIGHT


OVERALL= THIS BATTLE WAS KIND ONE-SIDED RAPVERSE HAD NO GOOD PUNCHES EXCEPT THE LAST LINE WITH AN PERSONAL...BUT OTHER THAN THAT HIS VERSE WASNT GOOD NO HARD PUNCHES, GOOD FLOW...ITS JUST THE PUNCHES U LACKED IN......JAE BURNS CAME ALRIGHT HE GOT MY VOTE BY AN LAND SLIDE...JAE ELEVATE ON PUNCHES HIT HARDER NEXT TIME AND USE PERSONALS...HE GOT MY VOTE CAUSE OF HARDER PUNCHES....LIKE I SAID JAEBURNS WON THIS BY AN LAND SLIDE


PEACE

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