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Old 12-13-04, 06:12 PM   #14
....Gone....
I walk & walk over you
 
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This was feedback posted for ..Lyrical..

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youll neva be compatible to step up to the leval that im currently on/
i read ya shit ya "flows" is non exsistent like water when the current is gone/
the thought of you "pisses me off" so my bladder must be more than full/
claimin you wanna "spit at me" but your accuracy's horrible/
rappins become effortless i just rhyme while i tell a joke or two/
i feel bad cause your family wont be supportive and vote for you/
^^^^^^^^^ SOME PLAYED OUT PUNCHES BUT THE FIRST BAR...THE OPENER WAS AN GOOD PUNCH....NO PERSONALS....NOT AN GOOD STAND OUT VERSE FROM YOU TRUTH....PUNCHES WERE PLAYED OUT EXCEPT THE FIRST BAR


I don’t have to try hard, cause this bitch can’t digest rhymes
I’m iller by far...cause his check-in contained his best line
Now watch me fry his bullshit line...I don’t even try to top him
I’m at the very top of this site...He’s from ‘around’ the bottom
So I won’t invest time, in the total destruction of this newbie
If he only used the letters ‘d’ & ‘o’, he still couldn’t out ‘do’ me
^^^^^^^^^^^^ ALRIGHT LYRICAL U HAD SOME PUNCHES AND SOME WORDPLAYS WHICH WAS GOOD FAM...


OVERALL= THIS BATTLE IS ONE SIDED TRUTH U CAME OUT WITH PLAYED OUT PUNCHES AND YA FLOW WAS A LIL CHOPPED UP...EXCEPT THE FIRST BAR IT WAS AN GOOD PUNCHE YOUR OPENER.....AS I READ THROUGHOUT IT ALL YOUR PUNCHES CAME A LIL PLAYED HIT HARDER........LYRICAL U HAD AN GOOD VERSE FLOW....AND PUNCHES....USE PERSONALS NEXT TIME IN YOUR BATTLES...ANYWAY......LYRICAL U GOT MY VOTE CAUSE OF HARDER PUNCHES MOST COMPLEX VERSE...AND GOOD FLOW


PEACE

DAYUM THIS IS AN FEEDBACK CANT VOTE CAUSE OF 100 POST

SRRY
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