I walk & walk over you
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This was feedback posted for ..Lyrical..
IP:
This dude thinks he's hard but shit it don't matter
Only 6 lines away now till his dreams shatter
I'm flattered you wanna battle ME but this one sided
You bite rhymes my dicks out come bite it
Get ya buddy his dick's out ride it that's the only way you'll win
Ya rhymes like paper and mine full of whirls n winds
Get the girls and friends so they can see ya get ya ass kicked
Get off crack kid you can't rap n skill is what you lackin
^^^^^^^^^^^^ FLOW WAS CHOPPED UP....PUNCHES WERE PLAYED OUT....ELEVATE ON PUNCHES...AND USE PERSONALS....EITHER WAY.....THIS WAS NOT AN GOOD VERSE
Shut the fuck up with your wack vocab…you lack dope lines
U Milk your flow for what it's worth…like you got lactose rhymes
Split Your Personality Apart…So Your Bars Aren’t From Different Points of View
This Day You'll Rue…Fearing The Mail…Because the Pain I’m Delivering You
Ruff Is Never Ahead…Nor Behind…Her Direction Is Wrong
Another Win Under My Belt…And That’s Where Ruff Belongs
Yep Its True, Ruff Is Addicted 2 Homo Ass…Let Me Help Kick Ya Habit
Ya Only Dropped Ill When I Bit Ya Check In…But Honestly…That’s It
^^^^^^^^^^^ FIX YOUR STRUTURE AND PLS DONT PUT YOUR VERSE IN BOLD FAM....U HAD SOME PUNCHES...GOOD FLOW....
OVERALL= THIS WAS AN ONE-SIDED BATTLE RUFFRIDAH CAME PLAYED WITH HER PUNCHES...FLOW WAS A LIL CHOPPED UP BUT THE PUNCHES WERE PLAYED OUT ELEVATE RUFF
LYRICAL HE HAD SOME PUNCHES GOOD FLOW...PUNCHES WERE THE THINGS THAT BEAT RUFF IN THIS BATTLE
SO I HAVE TO GIVE THIS TO RUFF FOR HARDER PUNCHES
PEACE
O DAYUM THIS IS AN FEEDBACK SRRY I CANT VOTE
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.:* Crhyme Sindicate* :.
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