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Old 12-13-04, 06:42 PM   #16
Die Hard
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Voted For: ..Lyrical..

Lyrical takes the crown on this one.. Good wordplay... Definately better vocab and structure... The personals were good as well.
So I won’t invest time, in the total destruction of this newbie
If he only used the letters ‘d’ & ‘o’, he still couldn’t out ‘do’ me
That was a good line
rappins become effortless i just rhyme while i tell a joke or two/
i feel bad cause your family wont be supportive and vote for you/
that was a wack line...
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