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Old 12-13-04, 07:24 PM   #1
SR$
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From: Detroit, MI (tha Murda Mitten)
Exclamation i want feedback on this...its HOT

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just a quickie i found in one of my flow books...hope yall like...I WANT MAJOR FEEDBACK ON THIS...cuz im tryin to find my style...4real

SR$, you can tell he's nice
Want enough dough to get my cell iced;
tote guns bigger than a hitman price
Droppin' mad bombs
Fuck safety, keep the gat on; .44 Taurus in my Phat Farm
Sucker, please, it's the D-P - fuckin' -Bs
They back puffin' trees' got your girl suckin' on these
Fool, be strapped, no way you can do me, black
Let the tooley clap, put one in your bourgeois hat
Put your brains in your fuckin lap
Like Air Max, I'm everywhere you be at, settin' booby traps
Holy shit! $ the black Moby Dick!
Yo, he's sick! Walk out the door, he get a, "Blow me, bitch!"
Fuck around, my crew might base
You should quit this and go back to school like Ma$e
Cuz at rap you suck, I'll have to clap you fucks
Make my octopus wrap you up, nigga talk to my nuts
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