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Old 12-13-04, 08:27 PM   #6
Triple_N
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ah'ight playa....this track was ah'ight....one thing dats real noticeable is the beat is louder than the vocals...I think ya vocals is at a good vol an beat is a tad loud...ya flow was on point, an lyrics were cool....but u got da same problem as every rapper wit some gravel in his vocal cords got.....kinda of a monotone delivery....it lacked energy to me...its a laidback beat but u was too laidback on it, u need to have some influentions in ya verse an change ya rhyme scheme up more...it'll really bring u out...cuz it was a good track but jus okay to me....something I'd give for respect too, but wouldn't even remember a week later...jus livin up a lil on da track on u got ya game wrapped son...stay up...............1
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