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Old 12-13-04, 08:43 PM   #14
SikezstWun
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This was feedback posted for Death

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you dont wana step to me man/
ill put a red dot on this nigga like a 7-Up can/
Not a good opener...

ill melt this nigga like smores/
you get no respect like Bush at tha Source awards/
Ehh, Bush punches are played

you like a tape and i got bullets to "eject"/
you know im tha best when i done fryed all the rest/
No... corny

you cant win, do only thing you can "beat" is your meat/
when you have a fever is da only time you come close to my heat/
One of the best lines in the verse

ill leave ya body over an open fire to roast/
ya need to elevate cuz ya flow needs more work than Michael Jacksons nose/
MJ punches are pretty played too

on this rhyming highway you need to make a U turn/
cuz beside ya name(JaeBurnz354) ya verse also crashed and burned/
Bad closer.. cudda done more with it.
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