Voted For: JaeBurnz354

JaeBurnz definately won this one with better punches and wordplay... You could work on ur structure, but every thing else was near perfect...
Fave/Best Line:There that should give you more of a punchline...
I'ma leave u liek six packs, when it's crunchtime/(Hurting)

Please Return Tha Favor @ http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=165710

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