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Old 12-14-04, 02:10 AM   #9
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A Reflection Of The Past
 
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ok

wrekk basically your lines were all filler,i didnt see any punches,and i think thats somethin you must work on if you ever plan on being a solid textcee,your verse was also simplistic...so elevate

led poetic
some of your lines were simple also but they were affective and witty punches,u had wordplay and creativity,and a nice setup,your personals also were a plus....so ima give it to you

this was a weak battle

i mean led din't have to come that hard really to win this.....but he gets this easily

v/led poetic
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