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IP:
ok....
here's the good and bad parts of both verses:
indeph
you under par like before a T-off..wait for elivation..
you would think with two names..you'd have a reputation..
clearly ya best line.... other rhymes were forced... almost all were pretty simple... no complexity... punches weren't really hitting too hard.... i believe you coulda come a lot better than this
bwall
only thing ill is that ill-in-noise...
nice line here but everything else was all over the place... i barely understood ya verse... punches neer connected... you failed to get at him effectively... you jumbled up all of your ideas and in the end you left me confused... maybe it was too complex for us and there may be some kind of meaning behind ya verse, but without explanations it's real hard to give you props for ya drop
v/ goes to indeph... better rhymes (though forced), attempt at punches
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