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Old 12-14-04, 04:56 PM   #3
....Gone....
I walk & walk over you
 
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OK good verse....make some longer....you got potential...ok punches.....nice wordplays.......fix your struture cause its messing up the flow 7/10 fix your struture...upp your vocab......


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"FREESTYLE#2(BREAKING OUT)


THE LINK ITS IN THE SIG


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