Like everyone else said... Structure is bad... O well... Not a huge deal...

Love is a Beautiful thing... Its the Essence of life...
In the same sense love is dangerous.. it can change your life...

I mean... Not a bad line... But you use life both times... Which isn't that bad, except for the fact that this poem/song is only 6 lines. Good emotion though.

6/10... Would be better if longer.