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Old 12-14-04, 10:12 PM   #9
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Voted For: Myth

in-vision you had a alrite flow to your rap opener was kinda weak content was regular stuff "this guys a myth" wasnt so great of a punch you focus of cutting the tongue twice too which threw me off. give ya verse a 2.5/5

Myth you came a little better looked like you put a more work into yours, best part of your verse was your opener.
i'll throw a zippo lighter into the bushes to start a brush fire
kid swear he "On Fire" like "lloyd banks" but i'm bout to crush tyra
i got a certain problem i'm "addicted" to ripping veterans and ya next *
big words? u unable to pronounce em so i know u used a webster in ya text
nice verse 3.4/5 you had stronger punches but come harder next time round.
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