Damn... Nice piece... Structure was on the entire time and that made it flow like crazy... Good vocab... The emotion really stood out in this. All of these whack ass hoes who think they can be emotional and sound like dumbasses ruin this site... But this was a crazy dope piece... Don't know why you made the first verse uneven lines, but it still flows good... One of the best pieces i've read in a long time... 9.5/10