hows this?

stupid ass pm'in me about wat wat u wanna rap about
Y? u sayin u the king of lu
you suck 'PERIOD' need to get a clue
sayin i stepped to the best layin kings to rest
god didnt like u cuz ur raps suck u weren't blessed
ill leave u like a bitch rapped and beat
like a straight ho going into heat
name a real rapper from Honolulu 8- 0- 8
lines droppin so much weight turning you straight
make u wanting more have u wishing for your fate
your rhymes are worse then my bad day
droppin lil pussy shit so ima have u get it weigh