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Old 12-15-04, 01:33 AM   #5
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Mike Hawk's Verse

The thing is, you fucking ugly, ya bitches is years behind
Only reason you like the Knicks...is cuz u cant get wit dimes
Best line of the battle....it had originality, humor, and it dissed him all at the same time.....did I mention the wordplay?
Ike is a softy, I'll come on RV to slay this whore
It's not a gay marriage...when i say he jus cant engage in war
Not a good punch.....sorry Mike, it just sucked
You scared of Mike Hawk, why wont you tell us
If i called u out, you would duck me so much, it'll make Donald jealous
Not a bad concept, but worded poorly
Nasty bitch...dont nobody wanna visit ya house
Ever since you were born..thats when they been callin it the Dirty South
Once again, not a bad concept, but worded really poorly
Ike, I got big guns....and you know what I mean
When I say, youll make it to the next round...........
....if you not dead after the first 16.
Nice closer....not really a gun talk line since it actually had wordplay in it. Probably the second best line of the battle...

Ike's Verse
Even if HAWKS sight are in black 'n' white, he's "gonna see im nice"
might try to imitate jordan, but nobody "wanna be like mike"
I've only seen like two or three of Mike's battles since he's been here.....both of them contained this punch...
may think you nice, but only to "yaself it might seem"
you say you tight, despite your record bein "twelve 'n' nineteen"
How is this a good punch? His record sucks......now can you make a decent punch out of it? No, you can't. All you can say is your record sucks.....this one ranks up there with a your momma joke
just comprehend you cant step, you "see my spits is crimes"
ripped up....hawk gets lit up like "trees at christmas time"
Horrible....if you have to use the word "like" in your punch, chances are, it sucks.....just thought I'd let you know that
IKE is spittin gifted lines, that rip this "misfits mind"
and leave this chumps frame crooked like a "lipstick line"
Once again, the simple fact that this is a simile took all affectiveness away from this punch...
I choose to elude this dude, this verse is a "lesson you might use"
you's a fool if you thought i'd lose to a "freshman in high school"
So he's a freshman.....nothing witty to say about it?

Basically, Ike came really played and didn't really know how to form a punch. Mike Hawk had Two semi decent punches that completely engulfed anything Ike tried to have go in his favor. This was a pretty crappy battle, but honestly, Mike won by a landslide.....and this is just me being honest
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