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Old 12-15-04, 01:43 PM   #4
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Originally Posted by livin-legend
niggas no dat i stay wit da dutch ill have my niggas post up on da block and shoot like mj in da clutch.
played.... been said like 1,000 times already...

i dont blaze up but i got da weed stack nutted in ya gurl eye so it's lazy like tmacs
that was an original flip to it and not bad just re-word it a little better.....

nigga i aint no punk my hands is nice i leave lumps on ya face like speed bumps.
i've seen this befor and herd it forgot who said it right but it will hit me soon, and nah u could of flip that....

i stay wit da beam and a tank a gasoline leave you somewhere shittin out ya last quisine
ok this was always kinda played....


all around not bad but get more original and try to re-word ya stuff better aight....
5.5 outta 10....

can u drop feed back on my open mic...

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=166048

^^ thats the link drop some feed back...
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