well i kinda agree wit JC up there man....u need to work on ya structure as well as ur vocab and throw in some multis fa fun....HO-LA!!!!it could have been good but u needed to drop more as well as put more emotion in it....i couldn't really feel nothin there so yeah...2/5...4/10 whateva u prefer....HO-LA!!
just sendin some advice to help u get betta....Peaceezy

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