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Old 12-15-04, 04:30 PM   #7
1mic
New to RV
 
Posts: 88
From: California
IP:

good but not good enough to be part 2 to one of ems songs!! work on spelling and it would be easier to understand!! also try to make the lines have the same amount of sylabols<(spell)!! it would flow so much betta if you did!! keep postin up yah skill!!!

if you wanna battle hit me up!!
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