Only the Illist
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Voted For: Pastor Choi
this was a fairly weak battle...... ummmmmmmm ill break it down tho.....
Pastor- flow was ok, lose the ... after every line it fucks it up... structure was iffy because of the ... ummmmm rhyme scheme was ok... there was WAY to much self glorification goin on in ya verse.... punches and personals were fairly good... you used good wordplay, its plain to see that your in elevation mode but youll get there........ 4.5/10
LilCali....- well your improving slowly like ive said before... structure still needs work, the lines need to be more even and that will help the flow that was off a little bit... punches and personals were ok but some were a little tired and played... there was less self glory in yours and thats a pluss... creativity was off but your elevating slowly but u will get there dawg.....3/10
Overall Pastor got this one... better punches and personals... both of yall need elevation but keep it up and youll get there................
VOTE- Pastor....................
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