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Old 12-15-04, 07:05 PM   #32
Wickedclown
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Voted For: Livin Legend

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahahahahahahahaah... this battle was... WACK.... both of yall..... but one was wacker than the other.............

Snook....- your shit was WACK to tha fullest... structure was messed up, even ya lines out goddamn.. u just ranted on and on and on and on about nothin... ya wordplay was bad, flow was horrible... rhyme scheme was bad, u had ZERO complexity... just horrible... not a punch u threw hit, personals the same way... overall i give u a 0.5/10

Livin- WACK... but not as wack... structure was horrible... couldnt even follow it, way to stretched FIX THAT... flow was hurt by the shit structure..... punches and shit were iffy but aight same with the personals.... complexity needs work and u need to be more creative... overall a 2/10...

both of yalll..........ELEVATE LIKE SHIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

VOTE- Livin